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Tuesday, October 4, 2016

Story: Goku and the Yemma Fruit

Goku and the Yemma Fruit


Many years from now, there exists a galaxy not too unlike our own. In this galaxy, there is a very, very small planet inhabited by one of the wisest beings to ever exist - King Kai. It's a modest planet, stretched by a smooth, green grassy carpet. The only creatures that live alongside King Kai are his trusty companions - Bubbles the monkey and Gregory the talking cricket. There are a few apple trees sprinkled sparsely throughout King Kai's planet, but other than that there isn't much vegetation to speak of - except for King Kai's mystical forbidden garden of Yemma Trees.

In this not too distant future, Earth is still the primary location of the human race. Not much has changed - technologies have come and gone, nations built and torn down, but the fundamental structure of society would be recognizable to even the most out of touch human beings of today. However, the human world was recently shaken up by an unusual meteorite crash. Within this meteor was an extraterrestrial by the name of Goku. 

Goku is a Saiyan - a human-like, warrior race that is intent on taking over - or destroying - the entire universe. He was sent by his people to destroy Earth. However, Goku was sent while he was still well into infancy, and therefore had no knowledge of his bloodthirsty mission or the warmongering Saiyan culture. He grew up to be a silly, pure-hearted, happy-go-lucky boy who loved eating and fighting the strongest people in the world. 

Goku grew to be the strongest fighter on Earth. He trained hard every day, but he wanted to learn more about fighting. He consulted his teacher, Master Roshi, and asked him what to do. Master Roshi told him the story of a great, celestial being by the name of King Kai. His wisdom and knowledge of martial arts was unrivaled in all of the galaxy. Eyes twinkling with desire, Goku immediately hopped aboard his flying cloud Nimbus and set off for the Kai's planet. 

With a great thud, Goku landed on King Kai's planet. 

"WOOOOOOOW. So THIS is the great King Kai's planet!" he said in awe. 

"Yes, so it is. And who might you be, monkey boy?" muttered an irritated King Kai.

"I'm Goku! Nice to meet you strange, blue guy!" laughed Goku, scratching the back of his head. "Could you help me find King Kai?" 

"HOW DARE YOU.. YOU LITTLE URCHIN! I AM the King Kai, and I am most certainly NOT STRANGE!!" he yelled, with tiny clouds of steam blowing out of his ears. 

With this, Goku was on the floor laughing. "Hahaha, oh my gosh, I'm so sorry! Hahahaha! You just look a lot different than I was expecting mister King Kai! Hahahaha!" 

With this, the King Kai was irate. His most trusted adviser, his pet monkey Bubbles, was able to calm him down though. After a few moments of deep breathing, the King Kai spoke again. 

"So what is it I can do for you Goku?" he asked. 

With a moment's delay, Goku jumped to his feet, straightened up, and responded. "I want to learn how to fight from you sir!" 

Now it was King Kai who couldn't hold it together. "HAHAHA! You want me to train you? You're clearly still very young and immature, much too undisciplined to be my pupil!" 

Goku frowned. In the whiniest voice possible, he pleaded. "Awwww, c'mon Mister Kai, please teach me! I'm very strong, plus I've trained a lot already! Nobody on Earth challenges me." 

"It's KING Kai to you pal. And while that might be true, the answer's still no!"

The desperation in Goku's face doubled. "Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? I won't let you down, I promise!" 

King Kai glanced at Gregory, his cricket friend who only shrugged in response. With a deep sigh, he finally gave in. "Fine. But I'm going to give you a trial task to see if you're really ready for my training." 

"I'll do anything!" affirmed Goku.

So King Kai charged Goku with guarding his sacred garden of Yemma Trees. These trees held the Yemma fruit, a magical berry that when consumed, granted the consumer mighty strength and the ability to teleport to anywhere the mind could think to go. He explained to Goku all of these mystical properties of the Yemma fruit, which is why he needed them to be guarded. King Kai also it very clear to Goku that he was forbidden from eating any of the fruit himself. 

Goku stayed strong - for a few hours. Unfortunately, Goku's stomach was severely uninformed of the restrictions placed on the delicious Yemma fruit and began to bellow. Goku doubled-over and let out a loud moan.

"Aw man, this sucks. I must stand firm and guard this fruit, but I'm also sooooo hungry!" he thought. "I could probably sneak one of the hidden fruits higher in the tree, but that stupid monkey is nearby."

He thought for a moment, then his face lit up with an idea. Sending his Nimbus over to Bubbles the monkey, he used the flying cloud to pick him up and carry him to the other side of King Kai's estate. 

With that, Goku scaled one of the taller Yemma trees and yanked one of the more hidden fruits from the top. He bit into the reddish-yellow delicacy and his eyes popped. 

"WOW! These are SUPER delicious!" he exclaimed. "Maybe I'll try just one more..." 

And he try one more. And then another. And before Bubbles could make his way back from the other side of the planet, Goku had eaten every single apple in King Kai's garden. The Kai himself had just been on his way out to check on Goku, and when he saw the utter decimation of his Yemma fruit population, he nearly fainted.

After what felt to him like an eternity, King Kai regained his senses. Then, he got mad. 

"GOOOOOOKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!" he screamed at the top of his lungs. Goku leaped up, still chewing the last few Yemma fruit before he called his Nimbus over to him. With the strength of the fruit, he leaped straight up, and before King Kai could follow him, he used to fruit's special ability to transport himself back to his bed on Earth. 

This wouldn't be the last time these two crossed paths, and Goku continued his childish antics while still striving to become the greatest fighter in the universe. He didn't earn his training on that day, but one day he would. 

Goku Edit by Jaxaly

Drawing of Goku by DeviantArt user Jaxaly

Author's Note: This story in a mixture of the reading I did this week in the Monkey King unit and a cartoon that I watched while growing up - Dragonball Z. There were a lot of similarities in the characters of Sun Wu Kung and Goku (childish, wanting to learn and grow stronger, unable to obey), so I thought I could rewrite one of Sun Wu Kung's adventures into a Goku one. 

A lot of the world from Dragonball Z is the same, but I changed some details about King Kai's planet so that he would have a garden, just like the "The Queen-Mother of the West" in Sun Wu Kung's world. 

Bibliography: Stories from "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" in The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhems, translated by Frederick H. Martens. Source.

Story: Goku and the Yemma Fruit


Goku and the Yemma Fruit

Many years from now, there exists a galaxy not too unlike our own. In this galaxy, there is a very, very small planet inhabited by one of the wisest beings to ever exist - King Kai. It's a modest planet, stretched by a smooth, green grassy carpet. The only creatures that live alongside King Kai are his trusty companions - Bubbles the monkey and Gregory the talking cricket. There are a few apple trees sprinkled sparsely throughout King Kai's planet, but other than that there isn't much vegetation to speak of - except for King Kai's mystical forbidden garden of Yemma Trees.

In this not too distant future, Earth is still the primary location of the human race. Not much has changed - technologies have come and gone, nations built and torn down, but the fundamental structure of society would be recognizable to even the most out of touch human beings of today. However, the human world was recently shaken up by an unusual meteorite crash. Within this meteor was an extraterrestrial by the name of Goku. 

Goku is a Saiyan - a human-like, warrior race that is intent on taking over - or destroying - the entire universe. He was sent by his people to destroy Earth. However, Goku was sent while he was still well into infancy, and therefore had no knowledge of his bloodthirsty mission or the warmongering Saiyan culture. He grew up to be a silly, pure-hearted, happy-go-lucky boy who loved eating and fighting the strongest people in the world. 

Goku grew to be the strongest fighter on Earth. He trained hard every day, but he wanted to learn more about fighting. He consulted his teacher, Master Roshi, and asked him what to do. Master Roshi told him the story of a great, celestial being by the name of King Kai. His wisdom and knowledge of martial arts was unrivaled in all of the galaxy. Eyes twinkling with desire, Goku immediately hopped aboard his flying cloud Nimbus and set off for the Kai's planet. 

With a great thud, Goku landed on King Kai's planet. 

"WOOOOOOOW. So THIS is the great King Kai's planet!" he said in awe. 

"Yes, so it is. And who might you be, monkey boy?" muttered an irritated King Kai.

"I'm Goku! Nice to meet you strange, blue guy!" laughed Goku, scratching the back of his head. "Could you help me find King Kai?" 

"HOW DARE YOU.. YOU LITTLE URCHIN! I AM the King Kai, and I am most certainly NOT STRANGE!!" he yelled, with tiny clouds of steam blowing out of his ears. 

With this, Goku was on the floor laughing. "Hahaha, oh my gosh, I'm so sorry! Hahahaha! You just look a lot different than I was expecting mister King Kai! Hahahaha!" 

With this, the King Kai was irate. His most trusted adviser, his pet monkey Bubbles, was able to calm him down though. After a few moments of deep breathing, the King Kai spoke again. 

"So what is it I can do for you Goku?" he asked. 

With a moment's delay, Goku jumped to his feet, straightened up, and responded. "I want to learn how to fight from you sir!" 

Now it was King Kai who couldn't hold it together. "HAHAHA! You want me to train you? You're clearly still very young and immature, much too undisciplined to be my pupil!" 

Goku frowned. In the whiniest voice possible, he pleaded. "Awwww, c'mon Mister Kai, please teach me! I'm very strong, plus I've trained a lot already! Nobody on Earth challenges me." 

"It's KING Kai to you pal. And while that might be true, the answer's still no!"

The desperation in Goku's face doubled. "Pleeeeeeeeeeeeeeease? I won't let you down, I promise!" 

King Kai glanced at Gregory, his cricket friend who only shrugged in response. With a deep sigh, he finally gave in. "Fine. But I'm going to give you a trial task to see if you're really ready for my training." 

"I'll do anything!" affirmed Goku.

So King Kai charged Goku with guarding his sacred garden of Yemma Trees. These trees held the Yemma fruit, a magical berry that when consumed, granted the consumer mighty strength and the ability to teleport to anywhere the mind could think to go. He explained to Goku all of these mystical properties of the Yemma fruit, which is why he needed them to be guarded. King Kai also it very clear to Goku that he was forbidden from eating any of the fruit himself. 

Goku stayed strong - for a few hours. Unfortunately, Goku's stomach was severely uninformed of the restrictions placed on the delicious Yemma fruit and began to bellow. Goku doubled-over and let out a loud moan.

"Aw man, this sucks. I must stand firm and guard this fruit, but I'm also sooooo hungry!" he thought. "I could probably sneak one of the hidden fruits higher in the tree, but that stupid monkey is nearby."

He thought for a moment, then his face lit up with an idea. Sending his Nimbus over to Bubbles the monkey, he used the flying cloud to pick him up and carry him to the other side of King Kai's estate. 

With that, Goku scaled one of the taller Yemma trees and yanked one of the more hidden fruits from the top. He bit into the reddish-yellow delicacy and his eyes popped. 

"WOW! These are SUPER delicious!" he exclaimed. "Maybe I'll try just one more..." 

And he try one more. And then another. And before Bubbles could make his way back from the other side of the planet, Goku had eaten every single apple in King Kai's garden. The Kai himself had just been on his way out to check on Goku, and when he saw the utter decimation of his Yemma fruit population, he nearly fainted.

After what felt to him like an eternity, King Kai regained his senses. Then, he got mad. 

"GOOOOOOKUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU!" he screamed at the top of his lungs. Goku leaped up, still chewing the last few Yemma fruit before he called his Nimbus over to him. With the strength of the fruit, he leaped straight up, and before King Kai could follow him, he used to fruit's special ability to transport himself back to his bed on Earth. 

This wouldn't be the last time these two crossed paths, and Goku continued his childish antics while still striving to become the greatest fighter in the universe. He didn't earn his training on that day, but one day he would. 

Goku Edit by Jaxaly

Drawing of Goku by DeviantArt user Jaxaly

Author's Note: This story in a mixture of the reading I did this week in the Monkey King unit and a cartoon that I watched while growing up - Dragonball Z. There were a lot of similarities in the characters of Sun Wu Kung and Goku (childish, wanting to learn and grow stronger, unable to obey), so I thought I could rewrite one of Sun Wu Kung's adventures into a Goku one. 

A lot of the world from Dragonball Z is the same, but I changed some details about King Kai's planet so that he would have a garden, just like the "The Queen-Mother of the West" in Sun Wu Kung's world. 

Bibliography: Stories from "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" in The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhems, translated by Frederick H. Martens. Source.

Monday, October 3, 2016

Reading Notes: The Monkey King, Part B

The Lord of the Heavens

The gods are very forgiving in these stories, unlike the stories from Greek mythology. Although the servants in heaven (I'm not sure if this meant gods or just people who worked in heaven) were quick to condemn Sun Wu Kung, the North Wind god and the Lord were very forgiving of his behavior and gave him a position in heaven.

The Great Saint

Unfortunately, Sun Wu Kung didn't really know that he was doing servant work so the work that he did is kind of invalidated. His outrage is unfortunate because it shows he hasn't really learned the ways of the heavens.

Notscha, Son of Li Dsing


The power of the Monkey King is much greater than  I thought. I wonder why the gods are not more powerful than him?

The Queen-Mother of the West

Saint seems like a real punk. Also, the forbidden fruit is a common theme in stories like these. (Like Adam and Eve).

Laotzse

I really like how clever Saint is, even though he is using his cunning to deceive people. I hope he doesn't end up dying, but he is acting much like a "lovable scamp" character in this narrative.

Yang Oerlang

What an exciting chase between the two shape shifters. It would be cool to do a scene like this in a story where there are even more species, like across a galaxy or something. Maybe like a bounty hunter sort of deal?

The Destiny of Sun Wu Kung

I wonder what Buddha would have done if Sun Wu Kung would not have written his name in his hand. The logic doesn't exactly make sense to me anyway, but I guess having a great, strong arrogant being taken down this way makes us humble.


Xi Wangmu, the Queen-Mother of the West via the UnTextbook



Bibliography: Stories from "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" in The Chinese Fairy Book by R. Wilhems, translated by Frederick H. Martens. Source.

Reading Notes: The Monkey King, Part A



Handsome King of the Apes

I wonder what the meaning here is of "stone". Is the stone ape made out of stone? Also, I'm not sure if this really is Sun Wu Kung. I really like the idea of a waterfall hiding a cave because it reminds me of the Incredibles, which is one of my favorite animated films.

The Great Sea

It's always interesting to me when an author builds up a a "good" character like the Monkey King, but then later he has the character commit some sort of random, bad act. It makes the character more realistic, but always leaves a bad taste in my mouth. In this story, the part that gave me this feeling was when the Monkey King knocked the fisherman down and stole his clothes to blend in with the humans.

Sun Wu Kung Gets His Name

Ah, so the reference to the "stone ape" just means that he was born of stone. Also, I wonder how old Sun Wu Kung is at this point because he spent 8 + 6-7 years at least traveling trying to find out the "great truth" of immortality.

The Master

I really like stories that involve teaching various disciplines. I can imagine writing a story that involves a quest similar to Sun Wu Kung's where the main character is as focused on a particular goal as he is. It's pretty inspiring.

Learning the Art

It's funny how Sun Wu Kung misinterpreted the master's teachings. It's so typical of someone young and inexperienced in the world, and also seems to make fun of traditional tales where everything has to mean something significant.

Wait, what? Oh, I guess he really did mean for Sun Wu Kung to come to his bedroom at night? That was a strange exchange.

I feel like if I had been whispered a magical truth, I definitely wouldn't be able to sleep right after.

Sun Wu Kung Departs

Aww, poor guy. The master seems unreasonably angry, but he also knows much more about the powers and their capabilities, so I understand his decision.

I wonder if these secrets are actually a result of the behavior or if the behavior just complements controlling the powers and is the only reason a power would be given. If a secret power can just be given to someone, are there evil groups in this world that have these powers as well?

The Devil-King

Boo, that fight was kind of lame. The Devil King didn't even fight back really.

The Dragon-King

Apparently stealing is okay? It seems like Sun Wu Kung is trying to play god here.

Why does as weapon need to be heavy? This is a weird progression.

The Dragon-Queen

Well, I am really not very happy with Sun Wu Kung's character now. He's very determined, but his determination leads to him upsetting a lot of innocent people. The Dragon King tried to appease him, but even then Sun Wu Kung was not very grateful and just demanded more difficult things to obtain.

The Nether World

Now he is heaven-born? I thought he only assumed that he was born of stone?

So, I bet a conflict is coming with the Lord of the Heavens soon because it seems a lot of upset people are turning to him and complaining about Sun Wu Kung. I don't think they are entirely in the wrong by doing so.


Chinese painting, from the UnTextbook


Bibliography: Stories from "The Ape Sun Wu Kung" in The Chinese Fairy Book edited by R. Wilhems, translated by Frederick H. Martens. Source.